I am and I am not fishing for comments… sorta 
What I do want to know is – are you reading my story? What do you think of it? I have tried begging, cajoling… and otherwise fished for commentary on it… good, bad or otherwise and there has been nothing from you guys.
I can’t read minds. I need honest opinions here folks. I need to know what draws you in, what makes you want to stop reading… etc. I need opinions that are unbiased. Use absolute honesty and let me know what you think.
Carlo and I are writing this together and I know his opinion, mine and my immediate family’s… but it is the possible buyer whose opinions I need here. I can’t fix what might be broken if no one tells me… and all that jazz.
So… please leave a comment here or one there… I don’t care. Just take a few minutes… well, maybe more than a few and tell me what you think, please? Pretty please? Sugar and a cherry on top kinda please?
I know you are all busy with the holidays and shopping… decorating and such… but I really need you. Honest injun. :X
Well, your old mom is here…….kinda checking in. Youse guys were gone for so long with no postings, everybody has kinda drifted away. Meybe time to get back to T13 again?
Renew old friendships, and let ppl know you are back…….JMHO…..Love ya both.
Ok, my friend, you wanted honesty. I read the first chapter. As much as I love you, I have a real hard time trying to follow fantasy or sci-fi stories. Never could get into them. I’m sorry.
But I did try. 
And I wish you lots of luck finishing and finding the right audience. Have you solicited it on any fanatsy sites? Posted it on any message boards?
I went in and read through the most recent three chapters. I will email you with comments.
I read the original chapters that were posted over two years ago. I loved it back then. This is my genre. It is what I read, what I write and I liked it. No time now to read the new chapters, but keep on writing. It was good.
Big hugs and keep smilin’
I am so very sorry you guys, but the honest truth I couldn’t get into it. BUT, that doesn’t mean it isn’t good!! I’m positively sure it is!!!!! As you know, W, I’m just a little ‘ol (old!!) somewhat country girl and I don’t have the mind for ‘other world’ writing or fantasy. Please forgive me, but you asked for honesty and I wish you both much, mucho, LOTS of LUCK because I feel absolutely, positively CERTAIN that what you’re writing will be received well by those who like that type of writing. ((HUGS))